ORPG Storyline

Storyline
For over 300 years the elves have lived in peace.
But that peace did not last.
As the Days grew darker, the humans drew nearer.
On a cold and misty night, they swarmed into ashenvale.
Siege Engines cleared the land of everything.
The human’s military combating any Elven resistance.
The ashenvaelien government was overthrown by the humans brute force and technological power. (ashenvaelien?)
The once great civilization of ashenvale was reduced to a few concentration camps.
Since the invasion of ashenvale, the tree have become restless.
The waters, stagnant, the creeps, enraged.
It has been rumored that a ‘savoir’ will come forth. And all will be as it used to be.

So what do you guys think?
Does anyone have any other ideas with interesting plots or twists?

evil emperor mclinch took this oppotunity to cease power using the extra power he recives from his 11th toe to conquer all that would stand against itsooner or later everyone came to fear the wrath of the toe king who had built a stable army of follwers who he refers to as 10 toed subordinates